Page 8 was posted on 09/25/2006.

It’s late again. So I'll add my notes later.

Updated: 10/01/06

I didn ’t originally post comments for page 8 since I’ve been fighting a cold for a while and have been really out of it. It’s been a struggle to get the pages out on schedule, but thankfully I haven’t fallen behind.

For the first time I made a significant edit to a page after it was posted. Perhaps it was the circumstances of how I made page 8, but when it went up originally, I had some misgivings about the flow. I was concerned that the interruption of Perso’s train of thought portrayed in panel 4 was not clear enough. He was reacting to something that I was not showing. This concern was echoed by feedback that I received on the page. As a result I added a line of dialogue to help explain Perso’s reaction. You can see the addition below.